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Your betrayal
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Your betrayal |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
and each word of your betrayal was like sandpaper to his skin agonizingly painful scraping away what little manhood he had left he leaned against the wall for support and slowly each word burdened him until he crumbled as if atlas had laid the world upon his shoulders slowly a lone tear streaked down his cheek carving a glistening ravine in its wake he lifted his gaze to me, biting his lip his stare felt like tiny daggers piercing my flesh and all I could do was watch him as your actions shattered the barriers of his world... hope it was worth it |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Paragon, this was a real nice write. enjoyed the flowing thoughts here. Enjoyed. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
I enjoyed this too - nice read for a Monday morning, when I still want to be in bed! |
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