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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Does it still love Even when it bleeds? Why does it beg When it doesn’t need? Coming down on me The wrath The strain The hate The pain Does it still hate Even when it’s loved? Does it still need But cannot beg? Even monsters cry When their sky goes dry |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
even monsters cry, when their sky goes dry. Nothing is immune to this World? nice write. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
weird i posted a reply but it didnt show  oh well, great write enjoyed this"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ryan, yes indeed they do . . . what an insightful write amazing xxoo |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
mmmm...the crispness of your words is thought provoking. I loved the whole idea surrounding this piece. Interesting perspective. Bravo!  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Does it still love Even when it bleeds? thats how it keeps pouring out in the bleed |
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