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Cancel The Apocalypse
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Cancel The Apocalypse |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys 
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Cancel the apocalypse You think you know how hard this hits? I am about to rip one right through your head, And makes you wish your first five senses were dead But the sixth, thought. Leaving you comatose Like the sixth Prince of Black Thought Ohmmmmm... I am a poet who composes what the world proses And proses what the world composes. On my clean slate that exposes, This limited life that beholds us, Wrapped up in live less sites That numbs us to the truth. Wake up and see You are not I, I am not free, We are but we And we are but one energy under the sun Collapsing and being undone. And no I am not the favorite son, I am the seventh prince Like the six failed before me Will I ever be free? "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
...wow I'm amazed.. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Holy s***. This is an amazing poem. I am breathless. The best poem you have ever written my friend. WOW! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Matt, if I wasnt a Mod I would say this was F ing awesommmme . . . . brilliant write sounds like a rap to me put it to music . . . xxoo |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
wow,wow,wow,wow,wow, cancel my subscription to the resurrection. Outstanding. will be back, need more time. Nice mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
OK eor, wanted to pick out a special line or two, to comment on. But after reading a few times, The entire write is special. Real good one this time. Enjoyed. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
WOW.. eor..this sounds like lots of thoughts about the book of Revelation in the Bible. Sounds alot like it. Is this about something in the Bible? Oh well you know me. I would think that way, but that's just me. Very interesting write for sure!!! Someone said this should be put to rap..were they ever right!!!! WOW again!!  Amazing as yours always are. They always have something to say even if they sound angry sometimes...they always say something worth listening to alot closer.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
To be honest, I had to read this about four times... :| I know, it's terrible, can you forgive me? I've had a really REALLY long day... After all that though, I really enjoyed this, though I'm not sure I've still even gripped the full depth of it. Nevertheless, it is a great write, filled with the hatred of the world that so few express well.  Awesome!~Alicia |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and yep, like sue said, thats a wrap and so groovy................. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
thanks everyone!!! "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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