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SharaRose
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0 posted 2003-08-23 12:28 PM


Perfection, and Lecture?


Perfection, and lecture?
You're making
the wrong connection.
Not to mention
pure conjecture.
See...if you'd ever asked
There's some things
you would know
I'm not perfect,
All I do is not just fine,
that's just not the way it goes.
No one is any better than
anyone else.
I've only been trying
to make you see
you are wrong about me,
I can't help it
if what I tell is true
hurts,

You.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-23 12:40 PM


Very much enjoyed.. Honesty hits well with me.
green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2003-08-23 12:53 PM


I loved this and think Ill add it to the stock pile of awesome works of art called my private library.  

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

green_itchy_stuff
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3 posted 2003-08-23 12:54 PM


I loved this and think Ill add it to the stock pile of awesome works of art called my private library.  

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2003-08-23 12:54 PM


sorry about that. had a lil mix up.
SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-08-23 01:15 AM


Thank you Kaoru...it's from the
Thanks for reading, and the comment. I always love reading you. There are so many of you here that are amazing!!

Thanks Itchy.. I am glad you liked. I had some bad luck. I can't get back to poems after I have already commented, and closed the box.. I can't add.....:''( Help me find my way around this, or tell me someone that can?

to you both,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-08-23 11:21 AM


Shara - Beautiful and yes, I speak the truth and if they cannot take it then they have a lot of looking within themselves to do first.  Some things we already know inside, of ourselves - this is insight . . .
xxoo

SharaRose
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7 posted 2003-08-23 06:50 PM


Little wing- and a thank you. Again, it means more than you know. Bless you for being so kind.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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