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Third Libra
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since 2003-08-10
Posts 125
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0 posted 2003-08-22 08:03 PM


“Come in…”

Softly they speak
Within timing of sexual beating.
Bringing me here,
Broken, torn,
And dying.

“Come in…”

Devoured by the black fires of Hell, they are engulfed.
In lingo between the vague barriers of life and death.
They are, as they say, unable to break the heart of darkness.
I wonder if they’re better off this way…
Weak and powerless.

“Come in…”

But better off are these lingo-ed souls, than me?
Me…yet dead,
Blood not yet dry,
And heart beating in life-like harmony?
Such fools… they ignorant souls.

“Come in…”

Still, they are somewhat free of the murdering words,
That leave me naked and oblivious to life’s civil torture.
They do not carry, pitifully, the crown of bitter agony.
They do not look through the eyes of tragedy.
Yes… Better off are these lingo-ed souls, than me.

“Come in…”

I can fragilely hold their message
between the hands of my empty ears.
They tell me so easily, that I am unhappy.
They say I will be happy with them in their eternal hole.
Happy will I be within their ashes and lifeless souls?

“Come in…”
I know I will…
“Come in…”

Please, pull me down into your death, for eternity!
Pull me down!
To where the fools of Earth cannot hear me scream.
I want to feel this overwhelming hollow.
Hollow fill me!


Love for death continues to grow
As it continues to drown me…

…I lie within the heart of darkness…

“Come in…
Come in…”
they forever say.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

© Copyright 2003 Michael Moore - All Rights Reserved
click1
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
1 posted 2003-08-22 10:56 PM


deep, dark,and LOUD....Loved it...
      thanx!

Click

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2003-08-23 12:20 PM


Nice truly.  And a nice addition too.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

3 posted 2003-08-23 09:17 AM


Wow.I feel rather queezy with all the blood.Dark but very interesting.Maggie
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-08-23 02:12 PM


Michael . . . amazing wrting here
dont listen to them . . . you are much too fine of a writer to be pulled into such dreadful existence
xxoo  

Third Libra
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since 2003-08-10
Posts 125
South Carolina
5 posted 2003-08-23 11:32 PM


Thank you all for replying. It means a lot. I try to not let the voices or thoughts get me down, or too low. Thanks again.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

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