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Dark Poetry #3

Last Night

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

0 posted 2003-08-22 10:37 PM

Dreams,
like toys,
left by a child,
sun bleached,
in the back yard.

Friends,
hopes,
often dim,
visited again,
memory's narrow hallways.

Lost,
lovers kisses,
young embrace,
forgotten tastes,
of stolen time.

Thoughts,
like nails,
in the flesh,
of a coffin,
lock us in.

Words,
like coins,
lightly tossed,
in a fountin,
past recall.

Prmosises,
made,
but not kept,
like distant thunder,
on a dry summers eve'.

Click

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

1 posted 2003-08-22 11:12 PM

Very nice, liked the flow and set-up.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-23 03:16 AM

cool imagery.. i like.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-08-23 02:05 PM

Jason . . ahh the ghosts visit me often too, these are amazing lines friend:

Thoughts,
like nails,
in the flesh,
of a coffin,
lock us in.

Yes they do
xxoo
(check your spelling, k?)

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

4 posted 2003-08-23 03:52 PM

Very nice to read you again also

dkw

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

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