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wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-10-15 01:39 PM

I sought warmth
I midst if blue

Sultry yellow star
In October sky
Diminished heat

Retreats
To dark domain

Abandons
The day

And leaves
A chilled wake
Of frigid wind

I stand now
Stripped bare
Of any vestment

Any raiment
Sufficient
To console my core

Sit huddled
As shivering night
Envelops

Ensconced
In bluest midnight

And await
The return
Of the daystar

To be warmed
Once again

To be burned
Anew

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-10-15 01:48 PM

I love how you autumn the page.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-10-15 01:53 PM

yes... you did autumn the pages quite nicely....

enjoyed!

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2002-10-15 02:26 PM

Thank you for painting the page with the earth tones of Autumn. Lovely dear wranx.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

4 posted 2002-10-15 07:26 PM

the daystar will come, Ed

longing's
cycle

faith

b

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

5 posted 2002-10-15 07:45 PM

Kisses

H.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2002-10-17 02:32 PM

Thanks, friends
Kisses, H.

Ed

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

7 posted 2003-08-23 02:28 PM

and await the return of the daystar. Where are you wranx.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-08-23 05:03 PM

. . . ask and you shall receive . . .
Beautiful Ed
xxoo

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

9 posted 2003-08-24 01:32 AM

Very to the point. I much enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

10 posted 2003-08-24 03:14 AM

It feels like fall, and fall is my favorite season. Its not too cold, its usually windy, and it just looks cool; plus my birthday is in the fall. hehe
As always nice write wranx.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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