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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Lonely Place I smiled at their doubts, now I sit here in this lonely place at the back of beyond wrapped in deepening twilight, an unripe moon unable to define blotchy words but every syllable is etched deep inside. "no longer in love" "no one else" I laugh and tell them it was but a diversion, my tears I will save for this lonely place. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
nice write... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Eor. Maggie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
cusick, I know this well . . . and yes, that place just for you . . . ahhh . . . mannn . . . just make sure if you have tears - they are returned with a kiss . . . *smile* xxoo |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Littlewing, Wish that I had written that Maggie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you just inspired me Maggie, thank you |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
wonderfully written. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Enjoyed the finely threaded thought in your write cusick. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Mad Hatter for your comment |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Mysticpoe, glad you liked it. Maggi |
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