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Dark Poetry #3

Airbrushed Midnight Cloud

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-10 02:19 AM

Hey, if
something's walking
midnight stalking..
a velvet pose tranquil
insomniac..

my heart burns with fire when you
forget simple words.
small lingering
twinge of air bursts through
the warm way that whispers,

we..

we..

sea breeze
creeps
imposing veiw I stumble
across the sky.

holding my arms,
a bird
a song
sweetly sung by not..
rusted mirror lining
silver
tongue intruding
my words
silent and persuing..

stalking a
midnight cloud.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-08-10 02:33 AM

Wow. I love the way you think. Thats beautiful. Give me more.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-08-10 09:52 AM

Meg,

Very nicely done...

Susan

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2003-08-10 10:11 AM

Beautiful words, Meg.

I love this.

~Tier

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2003-08-10 10:11 AM

Meg,

nice choice of words and clipped phrases

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-08-10 03:33 PM

this is what im talking about, disjointed images that you somehow shape together and it makes perfect sense in the end

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

6 posted 2003-08-14 12:58 PM

"my heart burns with fire when you
forget simple words."
finally someone gets it, where have you been all my life?

great write adding this

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-08-24 10:41 PM

makes sense when you put it all together,
intricate yet the message is there

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-08-24 11:17 PM

sounds to me like you were flying there for a bit Meg
xxoo

ShadowRaven
Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 51

9 posted 2003-08-24 11:48 PM

Very nice indeed. Beautiful

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