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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883


0 posted 2003-03-13 04:47 PM



Lace and grace
you run so
coming sorrows of mute and blue
your songs are true

owning death
as told and said
long before
we could see the fire

in the morning - the glory rises
above the ashes
for our disgrace
once pondered
to the meaning why we cry

for the voices from distant
calling us to the place
sought and nutured since then
saying do you know

of the word with no fear
for death to hear
the meaning


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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2003-03-20 07:44 PM


I'm not sure I understood this piece. But dark poetry is that way sometimes.
mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-03-21 12:51 PM


Thanks WhiteRose, this poem does ride along the edge. Most deep ones do. Thanks Again for reading.

mysticpoe

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-08-24 11:10 AM


kinda reminded me of the place of my birth . . .
breathing this write
xxoo

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2003-08-24 02:28 PM


Appreciate all of the attention littlewing. Thanks again.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
5 posted 2003-08-25 12:02 PM


wiht you every step of the way

"of the word with no fear
for death to hear
the meaning"

i hear it loud and clear

great write

adding this

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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