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HeartacheEveryMoment
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since 2003-08-19
Posts 4


0 posted 2003-08-22 12:51 PM



~My feelings were broken
My feelings were nothing at all
My feelings weren't good enough for you
I sit here in the corner
Craving a broken-heart on my arm
Cause i know i'll always be heartbroken forever and ever
I cry the tears of pain
I pray to God
Praying for me to get over you
But its to hard because how much i love you
Words that caused me to break down
Lies that caused me to get angered
Trust which are the words "I Love You" i'll never trust again
The pain of the razorblade is the pain you put me through
Blood drips through my arm is the blood of love
Love of my heart for you is nothing to all
I sit in the corner
Craving a broken-heart on my arm
Cause i know i'll be heartbroken forever and ever~


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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-08-22 11:33 AM


It's get a little easier with time.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
2 posted 2003-08-22 01:29 PM


This was a good write, but I think you have a typo.  I'm only telling you because it confused me when I read it.  It says "Craving a broken heart on my arm" both times, is it supposed to be "Carving"?     All in all, I liked this poem.
~Alicia

eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-08-22 02:44 PM


not forever

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-08-23 10:57 AM


heartache, I often wonder why we are put through such trials and why love, which is such a beautiful thing, hurts so damn much.  No,not forever, each day just gets easier as you find new avenues . . . always in the back of your mind, but not right there haunting you every little second
*smile*
xxoo

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