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Heartbroken Forever |
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HeartacheEveryMoment New Member
since 2003-08-19
Posts 4 |
~My feelings were broken My feelings were nothing at all My feelings weren't good enough for you I sit here in the corner Craving a broken-heart on my arm Cause i know i'll always be heartbroken forever and ever I cry the tears of pain I pray to God Praying for me to get over you But its to hard because how much i love you Words that caused me to break down Lies that caused me to get angered Trust which are the words "I Love You" i'll never trust again The pain of the razorblade is the pain you put me through Blood drips through my arm is the blood of love Love of my heart for you is nothing to all I sit in the corner Craving a broken-heart on my arm Cause i know i'll be heartbroken forever and ever~ |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
It's get a little easier with time. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
This was a good write, but I think you have a typo. I'm only telling you because it confused me when I read it. It says "Craving a broken heart on my arm" both times, is it supposed to be "Carving"?  All in all, I liked this poem.~Alicia |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
not forever "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
heartache, I often wonder why we are put through such trials and why love, which is such a beautiful thing, hurts so damn much. No,not forever, each day just gets easier as you find new avenues . . . always in the back of your mind, but not right there haunting you every little second *smile* xxoo |
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