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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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0 posted 2003-08-22 01:14 AM



Billions and seconds
Sight hard to see
Pretend perfect heart
Video and protray
Milestone accomplished
Thick in practice
Interuption constant
Swim in this ocean of shards of glass
Coma and praise

Raging masses
Higher the numbers
Nusiance
Pull the plug
Blind by what I see
Constant in my eyes
Like a violent light
Abusive and cruel
Victimize count to three

This plague of hope
Set and determined
Shreaded alive
Lost in the depths of trance
Velvet black and deepened roots
Hold captivity to bondage
Bound and burnt
Wicked ashes of whats left
Stay and confirm this death of chance

Add and recover
Automatic and loaded
Strung out gone
Collasp and die
Awake in a world of dire need
Dead rush and concieve
Secret and invisible
Mysterious as it is
Eternal power domination

Break the rules
Open the gates
Start the proceding
A battle yet to loose
Trip and fall
Forever serve and hurt
Look away
With a pelted spine
Half all in all

Mighty path disruption
Concrete steady
Down we dive
Incinerate
Just for fun do it again
Simple and plain
Set its purpose
Sealed opposition
Giver of light

False hope denial
Glare of the shining glass
Blind
Hurts
Solid and truth
Melt tear drop
Eyes glaze over
I reallize Ive done it again
And again, and again

Cheap pure little
Insecure lecture and laugh
Grim
Pause reality
Just distractions
Invasions
And hold the keys
Given and ruled government
For the rape of the people

Communist dictatorship
All our decision
Feeble minds and evil deeds
Thick and conscious
Expectancy of acceptance
Numbers of the curse
An era of an accident
Expenses sore condemn
The lil goblin messenger said

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-08-22 05:19 PM


i like this ver darkly deep, i really like the last line, it really brought it all together...adding this for sure

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
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2 posted 2003-08-22 11:54 PM


Thanx eor, It was a pain just writting this because everybody and everybody else kept IMing me like I wasnt suppose to write it.  Any way as always Im glad you liked it.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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3 posted 2003-08-23 11:01 AM


Ok green, I may be twisted but I came away from this with the ideal that govt is condemning and binding . . . leaving us no choice but to even condemn ourselves again and again . . . this intrigues me, would you mind elaborating more - I have this on the tip of my tongue and the bittersweet taste will not leave me . . .
(check spelling k?)
*smile*
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (08-23-2003 11:02 AM).]

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