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Your My Hell
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Your My Hell |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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should i die for you? should i let you know i bleed for you you're my destruction you're whats killing me can you say the same is your heart into this or is it just mine on the line? do you like i or are you just in it for the pain my pain your words choke me they leave me breathless with a simple goodbye i'm dead i'm gone this is what you wanted this is my hell you're my hell.... |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
intense, nice write... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
The title had a sort of Sad But True feel to it so I had to check it out. Like eor said this is intense. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
"do you love me like i love you or are you just in it for the pain" Wowza! OUCH! I LIKES!  Great read!~Alicia Now I will add my one little thing? Your is possession, you are=you're. Sorry, I'm a grammer freak. :p [This message has been edited by blackhalo (08-23-2003 01:49 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
ouchie. i now need a bandaid. intense write, very brutal and honest. I likey. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness Chelsea, hoping you have rid this person from your life emotionally Nice bleed xxoo |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
How did I miss this one? That was amazing. Pain describes it in one word. Wicked write. |
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