Dark Poetry #3 |
No Justification |
cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
NO JUSTIFICATION The soft breeze from the widow turns to dreadful chill. I watch in despair as The message unfolds. Desperate men trying To righted the wrongs of an oppressed nation. Before me a nightmare of black merging with red for the right to be heard. Folding my hands I pray their cries for justice will echo in the hearts of every free man. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This made me think of someone watching the news about this UN-war we are bombarded with *EVERYYYYYYYYYY* day. Watch the birds outside. It's a much better show. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
war is never a fun thing, but sometimes necessary, good write... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Shararose, sorry if I upset you, probably should have posted on a political forum. Maggie |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Eor, thank you for your comments. I believe that everything shoul be written about. Maggie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
No, cusick, this is an honest write well done xxoo |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you littlewing. It is all part of life. Maggie |
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