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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas 
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If I feel the love inside myself That others cant actually see Moving with the hands of time Waiting to be set free I feel the passion in my soul My heart is full of desire Yet I hide within the shadows Unable to show my fire A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
this is a nice write, but i dont think it belongs here...to me this seems a poem of enlightment, it actually seem kind of happy to me, but indeeda nice write "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Actually it wasnt written with any happeness involved. You see... I have this wall that surrounds me inwhich stops people from getting too close to me. Sometimes it helps, but most of the time it hurts. I am trying to figure out a way to knock it down. As for posting here... I post ALL my poems in this forum. Some may not like it.. but I consider the *Dark* my home. BTW.. thank you A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awww this made me want to cry. Seems a catch 22. Not good if you don't, and the feeling it's not good if you do. Let's hope you find a way to beat that, but I think the "right" person will see through it all, and will free you like a bird on wings of freedom. Sending  Bless ya bunches, SharaRose @-->-- [This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-22-2003 11:30 AM).] |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i am not saying i don't like it becasue i do i really enjoy your writing, i do the same dark is my home, i didn't mean to have it come off as you shouldent post it here by no means at all, but you know what i meant, anyways stll agreat write... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
it hurts to be held back...and the anger at yourself for doing so..I know well.. dkw? long time..good to read ya again... Click |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mags, mann I do that too ... and you know . . one day, I tell myself, one day I will fly, as will you - as you do here . . . with your words xxoo |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Beautiful sad poem well written. Maggie |
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