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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-08-19 12:46 PM



You lie so much,,
you try so much
to push me to the ground.
Isn't there something better
you can do with your time?
Something more worthy
of your time, can't be found?
Isn't there another subject
on which you can expound?
One up...manship
Our ego trip
let's give it a slip
and let kind words
abound.
Lifes too short
for keeping score.
Let's call a truce
You can loosen the noose
Let's give to each kind words
quit acting like children
and being so absurd.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2003-08-19 11:01 PM


I understand this one completely!!!
I need to send this to my ex bf.  Its not that we fight, he just cant let go of something that is dead.  (personally I think it helps his small ego... liking that I want him)

Great emotions here

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-08-20 10:15 PM


Yes, sadly, I know what you mean. I would love it if it would just all be amicable, and just go on it's way. To care means nothing so the only other [*reasonable*] thing would just agree to disagree, and have an amicable end, and just let it go. Forgivenss is a freeing thing for all concerned. It takes 2 to have a relationship, and *both* have to end it. Thank you for reading, and the sweet supportive comment. Sending a
Bless ya bunches,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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