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Dark Poetry #3

hunter

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-08-19 08:41 AM

he stalks my room
in three
if fate doesn't
hunter will
he lies in wait
i lie awake

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-19 09:56 AM

Creepy..

In that way that kinda rocks..

but doesn't too..

I don't know what I'm saying,
you said I was cryptic,
my subconcious is proving that..
damnit.

Love it ..ignore what I say..
except for that, k? =P

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2003-08-19 10:15 AM

really enjoy your style.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-08-19 10:21 AM

I have no idea what you speak of, but i'm scared. don't tell it to come and get me!
especially if its paranoia, insomnia, depression, of a craving of fatty foods. I already have them.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-19 01:24 PM

kinda like hunting yourself up there?
all of them? Predator and prey
sigh . . . I dont like mine either
they argue wayy too much
I may be off here . . .
but that's what i got
xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-08-19 02:13 PM

thanks everyone

ShadowRaven
Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 51

6 posted 2003-08-20 06:56 PM

Very creepy and very good. Love the little shivers it gave me.

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

7 posted 2003-08-20 07:15 PM

Oh I love it, short and creepy. Just how I like my floors (?). Right, I'm insane. Good write

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