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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-18 04:10 AM


Sometimes
the most
amazing
parts of life
are really
the things
you pass notice of
everyday.

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-08-18 06:40 AM


yes, they are
and always have been
like the last butterflies right now, soon to be gone

mysticpoe
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2 posted 2003-08-18 08:23 AM


Sounds good to me Kaoru. " The things that you think you own, you don't and those things that you take for granted, own you "

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
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blues & greys
3 posted 2003-08-18 09:56 AM


like the amazing souls you meet, where ever they might be...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Magia_negra
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4 posted 2003-08-18 06:35 PM


So very true, Kaoru...
*agrees with mysticpoe*

...somos los locos para siempre
para siempre te amo
   mi vida...

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
5 posted 2003-08-19 12:53 PM


i agree with everybody.  Nice write Kaoru.  I should probably think about things this way more often.  Adding this to library.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

gemjop
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6 posted 2003-08-19 10:38 AM


You know what, it couldn't be truer.

I sometimes forget my garden exists, but when i remember? damn. heaven.

lying on the grass, feeling healed. i should remember more often.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

qtpieelmo
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7 posted 2003-08-19 01:15 PM


WoW!! Short, but soooo tru!!

ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-08-19 01:22 PM


AMEN to that
xxoo

SuperGlueRyan
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Possum Kingdom
9 posted 2003-08-20 10:40 PM


This is decidedly true. A very nice introspective/commentary.

~stoic

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