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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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it speaks to me implusing wrapping around my veins the stars intoxicating my very existance it coddles... slakes my insecurities it strangles the pain maybe i don't want to let go when i find myself falling deeper and deeper within the shadows of your.... SOUL If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-18-2003 02:27 PM).] |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"maybe i don't want to let go when i find myself falling deeper and deeper within the shadows" i loved this part, i find my sefl falling deeper and deeper, so many times i ahve felt like that...nice write "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
maybe i don't want to let go when i find myself falling hard to stop that feeling, i know, you wrote of it perfectly |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I'd copy my favorite parts but all of it was so good.. Love your writes. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
smiling HUGE here . . . fall, m'lady . . . fall he will catch you xxoo |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
Very nice. The feeling of falling deeper and deeper and not wanting to let go is something I can definitely relate to. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Very dark and beautifully written. Great write. |
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