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symphony_of_thoughts
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since 2003-08-03
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0 posted 2003-08-18 04:37 PM



I stand firmly mounted under life's weight
I grip as hard as I can not to let it crush me
A mass of unbelievable proportion gets heavier
With time adding new sins, problems, deaths

Let me walk free
Let me drop the weight, let me not get crushed
Barralling force of ever controlling, compulsive death
I can't escape, something always brings nothing

A solitude I have to keep myself
Away from this weight
I can gain strength to lift this weight for a time
My arms, back, and hands lay bruised and sore

Bruised with this mess I set it aside for this time
When I lay unburdened by people, events, responsibility
I can just relax knowing that this moment will linger
For as long as I can enjoy it


[This message has been edited by symphony_of_thoughts (08-18-2003 05:52 PM).]

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Magia_negra
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since 2003-07-16
Posts 77
CA, USA
1 posted 2003-08-18 06:46 PM


Heh, i feel its heaviness sometimes...
Good write!

...somos los locos para siempre
para siempre te amo
   mi vida...

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