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Dark Poetry #3

in your room

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-08-18 10:10 AM

you followed distant
sunset sounds
calling -
in your room
attached
to wandering
that cradled space
you held with grace
waiting
and the future owns
days go by
dates unknown
the feeling stays
the passion flows
the years that curse
that timeless thirst
those thoughts
now blue
your wants to be
from that room
you knew - you could see.
.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2003-08-18 02:05 PM

i can clearly see, love the picture you painted here...great wirte adding this

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2003-08-18 06:57 PM

Thanks eor, can always count on you to take a peek. Thanks again.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2003-08-18 08:13 PM

Nicely done M-Poe

"attached
to wandering
that cradled space
you held with grace
waiting"

Cool.....

~wranx

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2003-08-19 09:17 AM

Thanks again wranx, if you get a chance, would you hammer one of my write's for me. I know I need it. Not that I want to change direction. It's just, that I know I'm missing something in my poems. Thanks.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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