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Dark Poetry #3

Copper eyes

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-08-16 10:59 PM

Copper eyes disguised behind bruised skin.
Wearing thin.
Veins pop out at every chance bearing their indigo strength.
How I love to hate the blood that runs so hard beneath.

[This message has been edited by Lexy (08-16-2003 10:59 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-16 11:05 PM

wow

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-08-17 02:21 AM

i agree...wow

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2003-08-17 11:38 PM

simple, to the point, and you're, exactly right.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2003-08-18 08:27 AM

I really like the last line. good write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2003-08-18 11:40 AM

nicely done
~wranx

Magia_negra
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 77
CA, USA

6 posted 2003-08-18 06:31 PM

Interesting indeed!

...somos los locos para siempre
para siempre te amo
mi vida...

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