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Dark Poetry #3

Revenge

Krystin18
Junior Member

since 2003-01-19

Posts 20
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-17 12:24 PM

Hide me from my inner pain,
Surrendered yourself to my corrupting ways,
Blinded me with your joyus love,
How dare you destroy who I am.
Cut you with my blood drenched knife,
To Ease the anger, hate and agony.
Look at you in your happy little world,
Don't you look so happy?
Look at me in my pathetic little world,
Don't i act so happy?
I am the distorted image,
Of a girl I was afraid to become.
But I can't turn back now,
You deserve all the things that I have done.
You despise me and my deciteful ways,
The times I tore you apart.
Will you still be there for me,
While I take your world and shatter it slowly.
Revenge is a sweet but horrifying act,
Bring pleasure to the kepper and pain to the victim.
You broke my love with your hurtful words,
Filled my mind with empty promises.
And now I will destroy you like you destroyed me,
Whats the matter dont you like what I've become?
Too bad, you created me, live with your mistake.

Put me on display as teh girl that you tore apart piece by piece and forgot to put back together.

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

1 posted 2003-08-17 12:58 PM

VERY well written. Loved the concept!!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-08-17 02:14 PM

nice write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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