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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-08-17 11:53 PM



Go away
Do something better
Live

Sunburn, tear drops
Mechanical error
Programmed

Random prison
Bad habit incision
Kink
Trap

Stupid box
I hate you
Weekend hell
Prison cell
Dare to say

Go away

Leave this place
Addict
Control

No plan
Meditate
Feeble hope
Irritate

Stuck
Read, bore
Senseless
Little house
On my head
Brown inside
Thread by thread

Ill get out
Ill find my way
And salvage the rest
Of this wasted day

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-08-18 02:26 AM


sometimes life can feel like prision, espically when you can't get out fo a certain situatuon, but fantastic write, adding this

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2003-08-18 03:08 AM


thanx eor.  It makes me feel like I accomplished something when people say that


GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-08-18 12:15 PM


LET ME OUT, LET ME OUT.......
oops, getting trapped in your poem...good one

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2003-08-18 05:35 PM


A verbal prison. hehe.  I was on the comp all day yesterday, and I feel like it was the biggest waste.  

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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