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What I Can Believe In
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What I Can Believe In |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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WHAT I CAN BELIEVE IN Maybe not a God, or even a priest. Wizard with his magic wand, or some big hairy beast. But some higher power, something all around, 'Cause energy never disappears, just gets stronger, it's found. When people die, their soul is still here, watching you all day, keeping you near. God, Buddah, Hades Angel, Devil, Witch, an almighty one above, or just some evil b- What do you believe in? What do we know? Heaven or a Hell, for how you run the show? RIP Dad--I know you're all around me--I feel you here! I miss you so much!!!  ELMO"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Elmo, this is good. Our thoughts are never always our own alone. Guidance is one of the more powerful support columns in our present existence. I liked the expressions used. Nice write. mysticpoe P.S The connection of our thoughts and theirs, is not the only bridge available. But, the strongest. Where Separation and distance does not exist. If nothing is something |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
A lil chopy but I guess that adds to the feel of this one. NIce write. PS the end of this stanza compelled me to smile! God, Buddah, Hades Angel, Devil, Witch, an almighty one above, or just some evil b- GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Krystin18 Junior Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 20Ontario, Canada |
its really good  |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx!! I wrote this at like 1am that nite in like 5 min so yea it still needs some work--but I'm glad u liked! ELMO |
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