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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-08-10 02:09 PM



Deserve?
You say,
I deserved to be raped?
At 10 years old,
I deserved to be raped?
Why do you say such
unkind, horrible things?
Why wouldn't you
wish for me
protection
of
Angels
wings?
I wonder
why?
you
want to
crush my spirit
make me
want
to die?
Why
do
you
like
to see me
crumble
and
cry?

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2003-08-10 02:18 PM


Some people arent cool.  But even so they inspire great poetry.  Adding this one.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Third Libra
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since 2003-08-10
Posts 125
South Carolina
2 posted 2003-08-10 05:58 PM


As there are kind and nurtering people in this world, there are quite the opposite who take pleasure in causing harm and pain.
Really nicely written.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

Lexia
Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111
Nowhere
3 posted 2003-08-10 06:45 PM


I know someone who thinks like this and I hate her for it.

Anyways, a very good poem.

Alexia


You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

[This message has been edited by Lexia (08-10-2003 11:07 PM).]

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-08-10 09:48 PM


Thanks to all of you-- I appreciate you reading.

Itchy, and Third Libra --just makes me wish they didn't feel this way...hurts. Alot. :'(

Lexia- don't hate...they are the ones that need your love the most.

to you all,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
5 posted 2003-08-14 01:01 AM


so sad,i;m sorry some people are just plain *******s...but great write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

ShadowRaven
Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51

6 posted 2003-08-14 01:51 AM


This really struck deep with me. A close friend of mine was abused by her father from a very young age.

It was beautifully written.

Raven

Mad_Hatter
Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
7 posted 2003-08-14 02:10 AM


Other people have to find their power through those of us who they consider weaker.  Though in the end, they aren't fooling anyone.  This was beautiful.  Never give up...loved it.
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
8 posted 2003-08-14 01:23 PM


Thanks to you all...

Thanks Eor for the sentiments. I just wish this person didn't feel that way is all. :'(

Shadow Raven-- I am so sorry this happened to your friend. Forgiveness is the only way out of it. I vascillate between yes I do, and no I don't. It's a process, but she can get there. Give her my best, and my thoughts are with her. Sending to her, too.

Mad_Hatter-- It's not fair they draw srength from our weaknesses, but my thoughts always go to this question in my mind...What makes a person that way? I just wish they could find love in their heart that's all I know.

to you all,
SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-14-2003 01:26 PM).]

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