Dark Poetry #3 |
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Its Wrong So Stop |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Its inside and Its heavy, Thick So much capacity for more Just one Cheap dirt whore Corner sales Free A sample of their poison Come on I cant have that Better or worse Both So much weight on me.......... Sip Play the games and lose Win here and there Just a taste of what youd love But just one Someone else's entertainment Its just so incredibly hilarious Blood in a vial Laughter Explosion of ecstacy Pleasure mind Control the game Whats in this erotic therapy Hold his nose Gushing The blood of life But freely Your turn to make a move What happened Move Wheres your faith Absense of faith It was only a trick There never was a game Fortune trash Only once And never again a trickle of music from a well |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Whats in this erotic therapy Hold his nose Gushing The blood of life But freely Your turn to make a move What happened Move Wheres your faith Absense of faith It was only a trick There never was a game Fortune trash Only once And never again" rocking my world. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx. Im loving the fact that you like my poems and theyre all about the lower sides of life that are usually ignored or turned into pitty parties instead of just being acceptted and handled. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
would like to read more of your work, find that one word lines are good to come by occasionally. What is a pitty party? A party where a brawl breaks out? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx. A pitty party is where someone is upset and everyone gathers around to be all sad, when sometimes it could just be for attention. So basically its an over show of sympathy. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
yeah! great one greeny!!! loved this... adding this "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx eor. I love it when people say things like that. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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