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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-08-10 02:01 AM



Its inside and
Its heavy,
Thick
So much capacity for more
Just one

Cheap dirt whore
Corner sales
Free
A sample of their poison
Come on

I cant have that
Better or worse
Both
So much weight on me..........
Sip

Play the games and lose
Win here and there
Just a taste of what youd love
But just one
Someone else's entertainment

Its just so incredibly hilarious
Blood in a vial
Laughter
Explosion of ecstacy
Pleasure mind

Control the game

Whats in this erotic therapy
Hold his nose
Gushing
The blood of life
But freely

Your turn to make a move
What happened
Move
Wheres your faith
Absense of faith

It was only a trick
There never was a game
Fortune trash
Only once
And never again

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-10 02:44 AM


"Whats in this erotic therapy
Hold his nose
Gushing
The blood of life
But freely

Your turn to make a move
What happened
Move
Wheres your faith
Absense of faith

It was only a trick
There never was a game
Fortune trash
Only once
And never again"


rocking my world.

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2003-08-10 03:16 AM


Thanx.  Im loving the fact that you like my poems and theyre all about the lower sides of life that are usually ignored or turned into pitty parties instead of just being acceptted and handled.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

ecrivan
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3 posted 2003-08-10 10:18 AM


would like to read more of your work, find that one word lines are good to come by occasionally. What is a pitty party? A party where a brawl breaks out?


green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2003-08-10 01:32 PM


Thanx.  A pitty party is where someone is upset and everyone gathers around to be all sad, when sometimes it could just be for attention.  So basically its an over show of sympathy.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

eor
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5 posted 2003-08-14 12:52 PM


yeah! great one greeny!!!  loved this...
adding this

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
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6 posted 2003-08-14 04:48 AM


Thanx eor.  I love it when people say things like that.  

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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