Dark Poetry #3 |
Shimmerbird |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
The Shimmerbird waltzes in sunlight A blinding silver glimmer As light as a thought Held aloft on mere suggestions of gossamer The substance of smoke And it is within this dance That it is consumed ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
like something so beautiful to behold it makes it vanish nice shine to this, Ed b |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wranx, Beauty vs. entropy ... ___ wins!!! .m. |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
wranx "as light - as a thought" Great line Great piece Zall |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautiful... ~tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
dear wranx, the shimmerbird is gone? make it come back! Annika:- "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . within the clouds . . . |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Well nothing lasts forever. Nice poem. Beautiful. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
...sigh...(fantastic write) "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
and the minds are now full. great man. Had to add a little of my own in there. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"And it is within this dance That it is consumed" It's not such a bad way to go if everyone admires you... Loved it! Susan |
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