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Nihil |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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NIHIL Tranquillity, thy name is loneliness The silence has quelled my screams I wish you could see this Cause there's nothing to see I look beyond the stars for God But like here, there's nothing there I am, but not really here This isn't happening If I was to speak the truth, would you care, would you wither? Wither like the withered flowers Would you close your eyes and die Die the death I long to know Would a lie be the truth if you believed it? I try to explain, but I don't understand What my emotions relates And why they keeps holding me From giving my life to the eternal, cold nothingness Oh where have all the flowers flown? There's nothing more, nothing left Nothing more nothing less But an empty, cold nothingness Is this day or night, paradis or hell I can't comprehend, lying rigid in bed I wish you could see this Cause there's nothing to see Just a cold mist of nothingness As far as you can feel Nihil Oh God! Why the angels fall first? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Broken, nothing to say just *HuGS* Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Thank you Kethry You are surtenly everything but nothing  ~Broken~ Oh God! Why the angels fall first? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
*hugs* from me too, this is kind of hard to respond too.. *sigh* But I will respond to your quote, 'Why do the angels fall first!' I believe becuase people look on the angels as a threat, for they know they cannot compete - emotionally and spiritually. Hope you are ok.. just working through the depression. Email if you need to talk ok? *another hug* Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very well done. I like this line especially "Would a lie be the truth if you believed it?" Enjoyed very much. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I feel this kind of loneliness when I have lost someone special in my life...James |
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