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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
WOOOWW...... You rhythm is perfect,your words are perfect,the imagery is perfect....WOW!! This is just incredible. i love your poetry!! Wow. boy this is good!! i think i have to read it again!! sam¤ much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
you are a great poet with an awesome talent. Keep it up. Do not let the flame burn for too long for it will melt the awesome beauty that you hold. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Brilliant! You are the dark bard aren't you? Like a visionary bard of old. Amazing work yet again hon!!  Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
this is a very beautiful poem.i love it. good job |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
WOW---YEA I got chills from this one--I'm speechles--lol--that's rare--great work!! LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Brilliant. I am most amazed at your literary prowess. Astounding work!!! |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Swamp¤Faeryie ... "perfect" is a little over the top ... no such thing in my book (at least as i view my own poetry) ... thanks for reading. Xeonox ... my flame has been burning steady for a number of years (thanks to a wonderful woman) ... not much chance of extinguishing that anytime soon ... thanks. JamesMichael ... i'm intrigued by your comment and would certainly be interested in knowing what interested you ... thanks. Isis ... i hesitated for a long time before reaching into the "dark" well, but found that the imagery and expressions were too entrancing to resist, so i didn't ... my goal is to blend word and image into one piece using a mix of old and new language ... thanks. just_another_fe ... thanks for stopping by and appreciating. qtpieelmo ... my intentions exactly ... thanks. Verve ... literary prowess comes from reading ... i read more than i write ... thanks for your comments. [This message has been edited by ma miller (edited 03-09-2001).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And already you are doing a wonderful job. It is always great to explore new realms and possibilities and it's belief it is doing thus that keeps the spirit alive in trying times... Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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