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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
Robberies in night's stand still Shattered windows Broken dreams On the lone highway Within a bottle Peyote dances Tweleve nights In the crucified deserts On sedimentary sands Around the fire circle In a cave In a lost river bed Out in the wilderness Into the unknown Nothing is certain Within the urban labrythn Street hustlers And corner cunt workers -Feather hat lords Running on crystal hills From emerald diamond dancers Street phantoms The tear drop rapist is found In the depth of the city And neighborhoods are shaken By trainwreck earthquakes Out there Where the trees erect From underground realms of secrecy Like ancient hiroglific monuments Lies a grand enterprise The magazine article A derivative of life An abstraction of death And where the water Meets the sand And washes ashore From far away lands Life is created Father water releases Children From the seas treachery And emotions Are bourne California The one which I adore |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Wow! Sounds like Calli to me. Nice job. Street hustlers And corner cunt workers<------"I cant believe you got away with this line." -Feather hat lords Running on crystal hills From emerald diamond dancers Street phantoms Your poem was very visual and interesting so Im adding it. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
woah very philosphical like totally deep..over my head... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Very nice poem, I too am surprised you got away with that line, but nice job man, great poem. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Breathtaking.. I'm in awe.. |
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
Thanks for your replies everyone, I'll be adding more later. |
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