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Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-08-05 11:41 PM

I shouldn't have expected you to love me.
Or anything more or less.
I shouldn't have been so slient and weak.
Leaving room for you.
Now you live beneath my skin,
and every touch triggers a sensation in my stomach.
Building
up
into
my
throat.
And I want to
c
r
y
all over again.
Just for you.
To prove I'm sorry.
I shouldn't have tried to make you fall.
I wished you'd trip and join me on the ground..
your knees mudded,
your breath heavy,
as you kissed me.
And we'd fall together.
Things don't go, they just go away.
I'm sorry for all the things I said to you in silence.
I'm scrubbing away at my skin
but still the blood stains a ruby memory.
And its okay,
I'm fine with you being so alive inside me.

[This message has been edited by Lexy (08-06-2003 05:26 PM).]

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-08-06 12:06 PM

WOW!! I love how poetry always says the things I can't put in to words for myself. Amazing.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-08-06 12:40 PM

nice write lexy. enjoyed this one!

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2003-08-06 02:14 PM

I have to agree with the other two. This is a good write and it is enjoyable.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-08-06 09:50 PM

Wow!
Another great one from you!!
I really really really love this one! So much.
Especially the first few lines and,
"Im sorry for all the things I said to you in silence."
Excellent job, and going in my library.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-08-07 05:19 PM

Lex, sweet.. Bravo...

I love this.

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

6 posted 2003-08-08 02:49 PM

A great poem, Lexy.

La di da,
Alexia

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

7 posted 2003-08-09 06:12 PM

"I'm sorry for all the things I said to you in silence"

beautiful

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

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