“feeding the junkyard dogs”

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coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

0 posted 2003-08-05 12:02 PM

I’m tired of being
an extra in your movie

Always wrong
on the first take
with no second
Chance

Do this
Do that
How Do I Do anything?
How Do
I
No
Anything?

I swung
on a new rope

I hung
the moon
for you
once

Before you cut that scene
for a bar room brawl

but
cigarette smoke
and neon
is more you
Anywayz

Luna
makes me howl
for it
and she never answers
her freaking email
Anywayz

So
I’m just
puking in the parking lot
feeding the junk yard dogs

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS

[This message has been edited by coyote (08-05-2003 12:04 AM).]

Lady Moiraine
Junior Member

since 2003-07-29

Posts 24
Florida

1 posted 2003-08-05 01:45 AM

Ooooo I like it! Looks great!

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-08-05 02:17 PM

nice

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

3 posted 2003-08-05 06:16 PM

Thanks for reading, Lady Moiraine and eor.
I appreciate your comments.

coyote

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-08-05 06:26 PM

Felt this one...

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

5 posted 2003-08-05 06:43 PM

Thanks SharaRose, for reading and feeling my write.

coyote

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS

[This message has been edited by coyote (08-05-2003 06:43 PM).]

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-08-05 07:56 PM

You are VERY welcome. This write just about sums it all up doesn't it. Thanks for sharing it, and putting into words the way I never could.

Hugs,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2003-08-05 10:42 PM

Yes! I like this...

and this...
"but
cigarette smoke
and neon
is more you
Anywayz"

Very cool!

~wranx

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

8 posted 2003-08-05 11:19 PM

Thank You wranx, for reading and hearing the Beat.

coyote

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

9 posted 2003-08-08 05:49 PM

yea....

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

10 posted 2003-08-09 08:54 AM

Thanks, for reading and commenting Ceinwyn.
I appreciate it.

coyote

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