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PointlesS
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 21
Oconomowoc, Wisconsin

0 posted 2003-08-08 01:15 AM


These dreams I have they are so real
So scary, so haunting, so very surreal
Dreams so bad, they make me cry
Will I get shot, kill myself, or watch a friend die?

For once I wish a good dream will come
I'll meet a girl, or someone famous I'll become
Those are the things I wish I could dream
But instead death is always the theme

I don't go to bed, I stay awake
These dreams I have is more than I can take
But sooner or later I have to go to bed
Waking up tomorrow with bad dreams in my head

I hate these dreams, they don't go away
Disrupting me almost every single day
Tormenting me as time flys by
Walking around and screaming why

You can not tell the pain I'm in
I can't describe, don't know where to begin
These images I have you can not see
I hope someone out there can relate to me

Someday I hope I'll escape these dreams
Forgetting all deaths, wounds, and painful screams
But until then I'll walk in sorrow
Wondering about what I'll dream tomorrow

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Lexia
Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111
Nowhere
1 posted 2003-08-08 01:16 PM


I can relate to this. I dream about death all the time, but I use those dreams so I wouldn't get rid of them even if I could.

Good poem,
Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2003-08-08 01:32 PM


I dont have bad or good dreams.  I just have weird ones where things always manage to end up on the strangest terms.  I like them though because their kind of entertaining. lol   Nice write although to give it a little freedom or spice try free verse and let it rip.  

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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