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Dark Poetry #3

SilentBut Deadly...

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

0 posted 2003-08-06 08:47 PM

Silent but deadly
In the velvet forest
Of digital masterminds

Silence is goleden
In the house of silver

A Junebug staggering
On the floor of July
Will you be the last to die,
Among your kind?

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-08-06 09:38 PM

A junebug staggering on the floor on july.
Nicely put. I often wonder if I'm the last of my kind. Thanks for this, its short but beautiful, and very thought provoking.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-07 05:31 PM

Beautiful write.. I loved the imagery, the way you think is..well..

i can't describe.

ClaptonsLayla
New Member

since 2003-08-02

Posts 5

3 posted 2003-08-07 06:25 PM

What a superb piece of work! I like this poem of yours very much indeed. A brilliant mind, very cleverly written.

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

4 posted 2003-08-08 12:59 PM

Thanks for your comments

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