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Dark Poetry #3

Life can be heard...

22NICK22
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since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

0 posted 2003-08-07 11:34 AM

Life can be heard
In the pound of a drum
Have you heard death
Inside the snake rattle?

Heavens expulsion
Through the lightning release
Hells acceptance
Within the thunder moan

Mindless humans roaming ground
Unconscious to the unknown

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-07 05:31 PM

Wow!

I love your stuff, lookin' out for more.

more, more moreeee..i beg..

Lexia
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since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

2 posted 2003-08-07 10:26 PM

Very interesting use of language. Very good poem.

Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

3 posted 2003-08-08 12:26 PM

Thanks for your replies, I'll be puting up more of my works soon, thanks

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