Dark Poetry #3 |
Mother of One |
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sceptical loss... Brings ground to my knees, To lay softened petals ~from bloom~...to defeat. Withered and empty... (I seek inner self) To condemn this heartache~ (Remind of my wealth) One beauty between my soulmate and I One solid standstill (another blushed cry) Warm with emotion~ I grant the become... Through this life I remain A mother of but one... ***For all my friends that have not known till now~ this has been keepin my love from gracing your work for so long. Back now to heal and to exist...if but gradually... *kisses* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Very, Very good!! mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I like. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
nice write...i enjoyed very much... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I too . . . I remain A mother of but one... this is lovely Devina xxoo |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I am very sorry to hear about that Tanya but yes heal with us...without us if need be but heal you are blessed with one and love this poem sun...shadow glad your back hug |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
SiBri said it best. You know you are loved here, with us. And the write? You know...Don't you? All the best, deTanya Ed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh sis... come here and let me hold you awhile. I'm so glad you came home. You can rest here, lovely one. We'll circle you, standing guard while you rest. LOVE YOU. You have my heart, lady. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Powerful write, take your time, and take care! i'm not saying anybody's wrong or right, |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Your writting is beautiful. I enjoy your work. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
It has taken me some time to finally reply to all of you with your beautiful support...I am grateful now for what I have in life and thank you all with the deepest sentiment for the loves. and my sibri? kisses man...could never do it without you ya know? wranx...just hugs love. just hugs. well..a few more...he he and sis...you are gorgeous and I miss you ever so on these lonesome full moons... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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