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Lexia
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since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

0 posted 2003-08-05 08:48 PM

I watch as you ignore me
I’m silently pleading for help
But you won’t see my face

Contorted features, distrust abounds
I fear I am lost in my own mind
I’m waiting for you to lift the veil

Uncover my eyes, my heart
Friends that we were
Can you fix what has been broken?

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-08-05 09:55 PM

Wow...Lexia...do I ever know what this is like. As always poetry speaks about heart.
Good one!!!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2003-08-05 09:59 PM

I once wrote a piece called Broken and thought Id share.
_______________________________________
Broken

Why, phobia
of Happieness
Aid of cancer, faster the roll
higher the toll, beauty is black, no turning
back. The end is now. Now is BROKEN
_____________________________________

I enjoyed your Broken and its strange because I just got in a situation you described quite well.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

3 posted 2003-08-05 10:10 PM

Thanks Shara and GIS. This is another of those I wrote to my former friends. Oh well, I'm over it al now for the most part.

Thanks for the read,
Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-08-05 11:27 PM

I think this is one of the best Ive read from you. So much emotion bleed through.

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

5 posted 2003-08-05 11:33 PM

Thank you Lexy.

moshpit
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 143
cebu, philippines

6 posted 2003-08-06 05:56 AM

ganahan kaayo ko.. ^_^

thanks for sharing a beautiful poem..

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

7 posted 2003-08-06 09:57 PM

Amazing piece,
I love every line and I can relate to it well.
Perfect, and going in my library.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

8 posted 2003-08-07 10:29 PM

Thank you moshpit and WinterWren.

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

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