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Pinch and Twitch |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Its that feeling inside This twist almost a cry for help On the outside of the world Hoppless dread of falling in And being part of what doesnt exist Everyone claims to be happy and free But lies and broken standards Run ramport and truly free This feeling that you could And can but a gravity propelled self-esteem Holds your truth and misery inside Self projected and self inflicted Desire and distraction A metamorphic game indeed Where would you stand if you could stand at all Tall proud alone weak frail trapped And a joke Laughter at and from Shame A steady downward trip A spiral Hypnotised Parallized Constant It doesn't stop The bottom well within view Almost had a means for change A motive Then nothing would change except the horizon _____Flat____and ______still_________constant_______ a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
a metaphoric game indeed my friend, nice write...adding this one "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx. I guess this is my cynical side coming out. But sometimes this is exactly how things feel. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
When this happens it really bums you out, too. I hate this feeling. Such a let down. Bummerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Gives you that  feeling.SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Solid write.... Better and better ~wranx |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Shara- thanx. I have been feeling a bit down and it feels like going back up is impossible, but I guess thats obvious from what I wrote Thanx Wranx I guess I owe it to you and eor. a trickle of music from a well |
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