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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I know it doesn't hurt Immoral instant clash Touch and breathe our sin Staggering fear induced Confession niave and truce Pulpit evil slayer Guilt and heaven use God inside his head Wrong what Satan lead Chastity unreal Conscience underight "I know its wrong" Grasp restraint and hush Nightmares from purest scarrs Dirt for Hell in forfeit Broadcast mass embarassment Self destruct in suicide The lamb breeding death Was the Vatican's very breath _____________________________________ Im just trying something new. Let me know if this is good or if it sux. a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
personally i think this iis a great write! not necessarly my favorite subject matter, but that has nothing to do with it,.. anyways, i thought it was a fantastic write! very goood job! "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx eor. Im not a devil worshiper or anything. I just figured what could be darker than talking about the horrible actions of religious leaders and then knowing its not just cretive thinking but true. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
I enjoyed this and I am very much an atheist. In my opinion to worship "god", is the same thing as worshiping the "devil". If god truly does exist (which i'm sure he doesn't), then he made evil therefore he and satan are one and the same, or perhaps because god invented evil...he is the more evil of the two. Good write. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i did not think it was devil worshping at all i meant the religion part, not big on fan... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Mad- I do believe in god and the devil. I believe the relationship he has to all existing spirits is that of a leader rather than dominator. Yeah he created people and spirits but he does not make their decisions for them. That is the one thing that sets people apart from other creatures, the ability to choose. I feel like a giant contradiction. I write some pretty dark stuff and still believe in god. I guess Im just cynical. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
i gotcha eor GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Yeah, I agree very much with your view. I liked this piece...its different and interesting. Good job. Lex  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanx Lexy GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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