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Dark Poetry #3

When I Died

Lexia
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since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

0 posted 2003-08-04 10:07 PM

*I've been having a really depressing day so I've been writing all day. This probably sounds like crap but oh well, maybe someone will understand it.*
When I cried,
You waited.
When I screamed,
You left.
When I grieved,
You hurt.
When I died,
You loved.

[This message has been edited by Lexia (08-04-2003 11:28 PM).]

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

1 posted 2003-08-04 11:16 PM

Makes perfect sence to me

Good write

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

2 posted 2003-08-04 11:42 PM

Thanks Dark Kisses. I didn't even know what I was writing when I wrote this. Someone just said that it was good.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-08-05 02:19 PM

i understand this perfectly...good write i liked it, short but to the point, (i am adding this to my library)

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

4 posted 2003-08-05 02:52 PM

Thank you eor.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

5 posted 2003-08-05 11:30 PM

far from crap. Very meaningful. wow, its a shame pain has to bring out your talent.

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

6 posted 2003-08-05 11:47 PM

Thank you many times, Lexy.

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

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