Dark Poetry #3 |
Agreement. |
bgryan Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 30North Ireland |
Profound words heard in vain war and peace it's just a game as man explores outer space, the human race dies in disgrace! Profits made,battles won by another form of gun what is yours,I'll have as well or I'll see you in hell! Handshakes in a conference room agreement made,already doomed! Talk of trade and prosperity disarmament,you could have fooled me! make a wish and make it clear it's the last you'll ever hear! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
The loss hurts, and especially to see it on tv. Lets hope this all ends soon. The madness of it all. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
This "thing" which you hope ends will never end, it is the way of humans, we have fought wars for as long as we have been on this earth...sadly some things will never change. Very thoughtful poem, I liked it. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
this was very good. the ryhme was nice. good topic, I could feel the emotion. |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
for some reason this reminds me of a trent reznor song.. it'a a really good piece.. |
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