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Lexia
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0 posted 2003-08-05 03:19 PM



I Forgive You

I forgive you
For hating me
I’ve moved on
I can only hope
That you have too.

I forgive you
For yelling at me
I’ve learned
My lesson
Have you?

I forgive you
For hurting me
Even though
I hurt myself
More than you could.

I forgive you
For everything you did
But I
Can never forgive
Myself.

© Copyright 2003 Alexia Raine - All Rights Reserved
Dark Kisses
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1 posted 2003-08-05 05:37 PM


Sometime, someday... you shall forgive yourself

Keep your chin up!!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-08-05 06:34 PM


It's the not forgiving yourself that does the damage. Remember there were 2 people.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
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3 posted 2003-08-05 06:45 PM


Very touching poem, I know what it's like to be able to forgive everyone but yourself.  Well written.
Lexia
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4 posted 2003-08-05 08:10 PM


Thank you all for your comments.

And SharaRose, there were actually four people that I wrote this to. They all betrayed me in the worst way.

WinterWren
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5 posted 2003-08-06 10:01 PM


I know what it feels like to be betrayed.
I still blame myself for what happened, though most of it is unjustified.
Excellent poem again, and going in my library, again.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

Lexia
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6 posted 2003-08-07 10:28 PM


Thank you WinterWren.

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

eor
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7 posted 2003-08-14 12:30 PM


you are better than i i cant forgive myself or the other, a vicious cycle, great write...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Lexia
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8 posted 2003-08-14 09:11 AM


Thanks eor.

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

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