Dark Poetry #3 |
Tell of Hell |
PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
The scars... what do they tell? is it hell? Do they portray nothing? or everything? I need someone to care. Am I able - can I bare? Are you there? Please stop these tears! Please! I beg you! My shoulders can’t take much more. Soon I’ll be no more. 10/6/01 & 10/11/01 While I understand grief and rage, please know I don't recommend this. I'm just trying to show that someone relates and can understand. I’m a method actor, and I try my best to feel the pain of those my poetry is for. [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes scars reveal a time of pain and require a period of healing...not sure if you are revealing physical or emotional scarring...James |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Scars definately reveal pain and suffering...i think they tell alot and hold many stories ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
scars revel what the bearer won't.. or can't. great job. ~bjw~ ~To see the world in a grain of sand |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I think scarrs are cool. They make each person unique and everyone of them has a story behind it. They show what youve been through and what you can handle. Nice Write. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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shytownboy Junior Member
since 2003-08-06
Posts 14Chicago |
Scars also won't let you forget. Physical or emotional. When you see those scars you are brought back to that place again. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
scars are something most can't understand, forever there, always reminding...never fading, forever to haunt you and remind you till the end, but good write, adding this "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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