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Annie
Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 42
Seattle, WA

0 posted 2003-07-29 06:42 PM


Sometimes there is nothing,
                     my heart runs and hide’s.
     Sometimes there is something,
                               I look deep inside.
              Sometimes there is hanging,
                                 waiting in between . . .
               for the love
                          with the light
               or the monsters
    in the darkness;
and I  wonder . . .
       which one will it be
to inspire me.

For and inspired by: Mystic1

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wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2003-07-29 11:31 PM


" for the love
                          with the light
               or the monsters
    in the darkness;
and I  wonder . . .
       which one will it be
to inspire me."

Both, it would seem, could be equally inspiring.

Nice.

~wranx

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2003-07-30 01:45 PM


Nice write.  Nice contrast too.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mystic1
Junior Member
since 2003-07-25
Posts 14
Definitely not Kansas
3 posted 2003-07-30 07:52 PM


Great job as usual, Annie!

You know, it's funny. I posted the poem I dedicated to you all over the place too! This is starting to sound like "The Gift of the Magi", or something.

Keep it up, and stay in touch.

Quote:

"Life is like playing the violin in public and learning the instrument as one goes on".

-Samuel Beckett

Still watching, still dreaming

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