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wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-07-27 06:58 PM

Dark?
Well, it’s a whole lot more
than brooding children
playing make-believe vampire
in sodden, sullen alleys

Or moonlit graveyard games
involving circles and stars
and the neighborhood cat

More than cheap shades at sundown
and a fashionably bad attitude

No,
that’s not where you’ll find it

Dark arrives
when you can no longer choose

~wranx

"I've lost all I can...now, it's your turn"

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

1 posted 2003-07-27 07:33 PM

I see it follows you. If it didn't, you wouldn't be able to write this way. Very good, I like the lead up to.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-07-27 08:36 PM

and the pathway is becoming dim . . .
xxoo

IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

3 posted 2003-07-28 12:20 PM

You just helped me reaffirm why I like the dark forums so much, with writes like this...

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2003-07-28 01:21 PM

so true, you can no longer choose...

once the blanket of darkness envolpes your being, there is no turing back...

nice write wranx, as usual...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Annie
Junior Member

since 2003-07-23

Posts 42
Seattle, WA

5 posted 2003-07-28 10:57 PM

EXACTLY!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

6 posted 2003-07-29 12:08 PM

That same prison.
Its awesome how you write.

Its like with your poems when one looks at your picture theyll never actually see who you are.

GIS

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-07-29 03:51 PM

Bet you thought
I only hung out
in Open...

Lady Moiraine
Junior Member

since 2003-07-29

Posts 24
Florida

8 posted 2003-07-29 05:00 PM

in reply to:
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Dark arrives
when you can no longer choose
___________________________________________

I agree. My personna online is that of a vampire and I find that even in my unreal world, the dark becomes very real.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

9 posted 2003-07-29 10:43 PM

ace

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

10 posted 2003-07-29 11:15 PM

Nicely done, enough said.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-07-30 02:19 PM

Learn em ed learn em

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

12 posted 2003-07-30 06:07 PM

Ed, I'll be visiting here more often.

this is going in my library.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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