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Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
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New York

0 posted 2003-07-27 06:04 PM

to chair back
They are loud
old bones
Cemetary drones
whispering willows
tendrils to taste
my palate awaits

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-27-2003 06:04 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
1 posted 2003-07-27 06:11 PM

I like.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
2 posted 2003-07-28 12:50 PM

i love the simpleness of, but yet it spreaks so loud...nice write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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3 posted 2003-07-28 06:18 PM the dark side muwhahahahaha *cough* lmao sowwies sue!!! *sigh*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2003-07-29 05:27 PM

Your poems usually are good so I had to read it and it was good.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell

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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2003-07-29 10:20 PM

And here I thought only my bones, spoke moans to me.

Nice one Susie.


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6 posted 2003-07-29 10:46 PM

haunting Sue

nice to see you here

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