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Dark Poetry #3

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-07-27 06:04 PM

Flat
to chair back
They are loud
tonight
old bones
Cemetary drones
whispering willows
tendrils to taste
my palate awaits

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-27-2003 06:04 PM).]

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

1 posted 2003-07-27 06:11 PM

I like.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-07-28 12:50 PM

i love the simpleness of, but yet it spreaks so loud...nice write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2003-07-28 06:18 PM

Welcome..to the dark side muwhahahahaha *cough* lmao sowwies sue!!! *sigh*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-07-29 05:27 PM

Your poems usually are good so I had to read it and it was good.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2003-07-29 10:20 PM

And here I thought only my bones, spoke moans to me.

Nice one Susie.

Ed

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

6 posted 2003-07-29 10:46 PM

haunting Sue

nice to see you here

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