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PointlesS Junior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 21Oconomowoc, Wisconsin |
this is my first attempt at poetry...I never really was into it but someone suggested it...anyways comments are welcome  Out of nowhere, out of the blue. You don't know what just hit you. You start to feel nervous, you begin to get tense. Everything stops and nothing makes sense. You feel something inside, and it begins to grow. You begin you cry, because you'll never know. What is this thing? What is this feeling? The damage is done, no hope for healing. You can't describe it, but it's always there. No cure, no hope, no way to prepare. Paranoia sets in and consumes your mind. You don't even know it, it's like your blind. You can't stop thinking, you wish it would end. No one can help you, not even a friend. All of this is caused by one thing, you see. It's what most would call anxiety. |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Welcome to Passions, my Friend!! For a first attempt at poetry... well pretty good. Keep working and you might even amaze yourself Once again WELCOME!! A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
That was a cool poem. It was kind of bouncy. I guess I should welcome you as well. Post more. GIS |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
First try, huh? Well, try it some more cause you're doing good so far. www.heybroproductions.com |
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