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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-07-03 12:50 PM

Down to the everlasting
of longings, which never end,
linger moments
of sweet, dreamy scent
to feel, for real
it all passes by
the carriage simmers,
wanders
with the distance called why
close your eyes, one more time
to see what you feel
lingering, the moment
so lost and so real.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (07-04-2003 09:18 AM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-03 09:30 PM

"to feel, for real
it all passes by
the carriage simmers,
wanders
with the distance called why"

Beautiful lines there! Great write

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2003-07-04 08:54 AM

Thanks Kaoru, appreciate your sincere comments. I like those lines the best in this poem also, where the meaning and rhyme seem to meet at the right moment. Thanks again.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Annie
Junior Member

since 2003-07-23

Posts 42
Seattle, WA

3 posted 2003-07-26 06:44 PM

I really, really like this one the best in the DP forum, though Souls light linger's in my mind also . . . but this one, yes this one. Hugs

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

4 posted 2003-07-26 06:47 PM

Amazing. These words swallowed me and swathed me in misty images. I am so glad you posted.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2003-07-26 08:38 PM

well poe, you did it again...

"close your eyes, one more time
to see what you feel
lingering, the moment
so lost and so real."

damn...yep...thats about what comes to mind...damn...

fantastic write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

6 posted 2003-07-26 10:59 PM

Annie, thank you so much for your kind words. I know, I met another who has been touched. Write on Annie, I'll be there.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (07-26-2003 11:04 PM).]

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

7 posted 2003-07-26 11:02 PM

Eromyna, I see you have a mystic within you. Let it out, I'll be there. Glad you enjoyed.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

8 posted 2003-07-26 11:08 PM

eor, my soul mate, I'll be back and looking for you. Let's see if you can top your most recent. I'll be there. Thanks again.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

9 posted 2003-07-27 09:31 PM

Well done!

~wranx

"I've lost all I can...now, it's your turn"

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

10 posted 2003-07-28 02:28 AM

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Down to the everlasting
of longings, which never end,
linger moments
of sweet, dreamy scent
==============================
I like the imagery. Enjoyed.

smooth people stray by slinking onward
to the limousine-society
found in alleys hot
with Humanity in passing

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

11 posted 2003-07-28 12:26 PM

Thanks wranx.

Thanks AniKay83, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks again all.
mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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