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These Crumblin' Butterfly Gardens
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These Crumblin' Butterfly Gardens |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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The crumblin' fields of my butterfly garden... flutter nerve endings in transitions disgrace. shake fragile now- in mockery of feeding empty space... Tangled me- I sway to starve, in spider edged veins- of you. of me. of precipice. When I dance the darkest dance of love~~~ I breathe you in poignant memory glass... and drip soft from the wings of a moth. These crumblin' butterfly gardens... ~~~**~~~**~~~**~~~ Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"When I dance the darkest dance of love~~~ I breathe you in poignant memory glass... and drip soft from the wings of a moth." There you are! And you brought a gift! How nice. This space has been missing these words WAY too long, m'dear. Take care you Ed... |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Wow, breathtaking. Really unbelievable, one day I wish to write like you. Tomer |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
smile there you are feels like old times now yes thankin the Wranxy one for finding you missed you around here girl same old magick in this  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When I dance the darkest dance of love~~~ I breathe you in poignant memory glass... and drip soft from the wings of a moth. These crumblin' butterfly gardens... ~~~**~~~**~~~**~~~ ======================= OH GIRLIE...you KNOW this moth is feeling every beautiful word of this one... and how wonderful to find your name here today...tis been waaaay too long. Hope ya can stay for awhile... we cant have enough moth anthems round here.  "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This IS beauty . . . in its purest form I sway to starve, in spider edged veins- amazing xxoo |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
To all my good friends...I have sorely missed these silent meetings. and? Hope to stay awhile(tween calls anywho) Ed~ thank you. you know. *evil wink* my siBri~ (bet you missed the pet name) hope to read you again soon m'luv...and your right, been too gone-fer too long (country) Janet-my lovely girl, wonderful to see your name at the end of my ramblings. always one of my favs! As for my new friends, I thank you much for the support, and hope to read you all this eve... ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I love it! "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
littlewing took the words right out of my mouth...beauty...absoulte beauty...loved this "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
============================ When I dance the darkest dance of love~~~ I breathe you in poignant memory glass... and drip soft from the wings of a moth ============================ Nice. I like it. smooth people stray by slinking onward |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
drip soft, from the wings of a moth. These words give a feeling, of, drifting while that something else brings you there. Very nice. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I've missed your words.... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I too hope you can stay a while, you work has been missed! i'm not saying anybody's wrong or right, |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I have to agree with everyone else this is a nice write with beautiful imagery. Enjoyed. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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shytownboy Junior Member
since 2003-08-06
Posts 14Chicago |
That was beyond deep. I enjoyed throughly. |
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
Nice, the whole motif of the butterfly gives the essence of the poem a very semetrical feel... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I just want to thank you all for your support...being gone so long brings wonderful fuzzy feelings upon return.. Love to you all... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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